Reading Log Entry 6: On page 185 is a list of topics, choose one and write three possible thesis statements. Choose your best one and then write an introduction and a conclusion using one of the strategies that you learned from the reading
Thesis #1- Learning from your mistakes is the most effective way to learn. Thesis #2- When you make a mistake, pick yourself up and don't make the same mistake again. Thesis #3- When you fail at something you do, turn it into a positive influence for the future.
Introduction- Too often, people fall and refuse to get up or make a mistake and don't correct it. When people do this, they aren't grabbing opportunities that come to them. Learning from your mistakes is the most effective way to learn. Conclusion- If you will acknowledge when you mess up and correct it you will do good in life. It is those corrections of your mistakes that teach you the most.
1. Failure is not an option, but a door way to knowledge. 2. Mistakes are not things to regret, but to take a lesson from. 3. It takes more of a person to get back up and keep going when thy have fallen then to lay there.
Intro-When we were children we were so afraid of messing up and making a mistake, but as we get older we need to see that failure is not option, but a door way to knowledge
Con-So as we go through life have no regrets about the past. Look at the past as learning time and be glad that the past happened the way it did.
Thesis#1- To undertake on adventure is to live life to the fullest. Thesis#2- To be happy one must take in some adventure in life. Thesis#3- Life is nothing unless you adventure out and find happiness.
Introduction- Most people do not find happiness unless they adventure out into the world, but one must be willing to take these adventures in order to find this. Conclusion- As long as you are willing to take the adventures then you will find happiness in life.
Thesis 1: Complaining too much ruins good friendships. Thesis 2: Complaining excessively, makes others see you as a negative person. Thesis 3: A person that complains a lot, tends to be selfish with a negative outlook on life.
Introduction: Don’t you hate spending time with a person that is always gloomy and pessimistic? When you complain it seems as if nothing you say is positive or constructive. This makes people not want to get to know you because you seem selfish. Complaining excessively makes others see you as a negative person. Conclusion: We need to remember that complaining does not benefit anyone, not even ourrself. However, having a positive attitude will make you happier and more attractive to other people.
1. Never let first impressions be permanent on feelings towards someone. 2. First impressions can often be misleading and scare us away from a good thing if we judge that person right away. 3. Most people are shy when they first meet someone new which can lead others to think they aren't talkative or that they don't like them.
intro - Whenever two new people first meet, more often than not, they right away judge each other based on looks and appearances which turn out to be the opposite of what that person is really like.
conclusion- Despite what a person looks like on the outside, it really is what is on the inside that should impress someone, not the nice clothes they are wearing or the car they drive.
Thesis#1- Doing good for others only makes you that much more of a better person. Thesis#2- The thought of spending your Saturday at a community service project may at first seem like a drag, but you may be surprised at the fulfilling outcomes. Thesis#3- You may not think that you colud be the pne to put a smile on a strangers face, but doing a good deed can make all the difference.
Introduction-The thought of spending your Saturday at a community service project may at first seem like a drag, but you may be surprised to find out the fulfilling outcomes. The feeling that you get when you do a good deed for someone and see the smile they have on their face that you know was because of what you did is the best feeling.
Conclusion- Helping someone out in a time of need is a good deed that everyone should experience in their lifetime. The feeling of helping someone out that truly neeeds it is a feeling like no other.
Thesis #1- Kindess is a contagious disease from which there is no cure. Thesis #2- A good deed, big or small, can make a differnece. Thesis #3- Generosity is the key to success.
Introduction- A good deed is like a yawn. When you see someone else yawn you can't help but to do the same. It's a "bug" that travels from person to person with no end. It is "What goes around comes around" in its best form. Kindness is a contagious disease, from which there is no cure. Conclusion- Whether it a simple compliment or giving thousands of dollars to charity, it is making the world a better place. What if we all decided to "pay it forward"? It would turn the world upside down.
Thesis #1- The most common mistake made is not learning from the mistakes you make and preventing them from happening again.
Thesis #2- Mistakes are not only mishaps, but building blocks that form the foundation of who you are.
Thesis #3- Our successes are a result of the lessons that our mistakes have taught us.
Introduction- Everyone loves a success story. Everyone loves to see the diamond encrusted layer on the ouside that shines like a cloudless summer afternoon. However it is not our successes that make us who we are. Our successes are a result of the lessons that our mistakes have taught us. Without these mistakes, there is no success.
Conclusion- If you take the mistakes you've made and learn from them, then your lessons will become stepping stones on a path to a successful life. However if you fail to learn from the mistakes you make then you will walk a path never paved, but always ending in failure.
Thesis #1: Participation in a school sport teaches leadership qualities.
Thesis #2: When actively a part of one of your school's teams or clubs, it is teaching you not only leadership qualities but also how to work well with others.
Thesis #3: Joining a club or sport can teach you dedication and/or loyalty to one particular thing.
Introduction: In today's society, there are far too many followers and not enough leaders. When actively a part of one of your school's teams or clubs, it is teaching you not only leadership qualities but also how to work well with others.
Conclusion: School sports are just a tiny stepping stone to producing a new generation of good leaders. Without leaders, there are no followers.
Thesis #1- Gossiping and running your mouth to other people about a person looses friends. Thesis #2- Being disrespectful and not keeping your mouth shut at the right time can cause consiquences and disciplinary actions. Thesis #3- You should always think before you speak, you never know what might come out and get you in trouble.
Introduction- Failure to keep your mouth shut, such as, gossiping, or being disrespectful can get you into a lot of trouble or even cause you to loose friends. It's best to keep your mouth shut or even think before you speak and everyone will be happy.
Conclusion- If you will just think before you speak or just keep your mouth closed you will probably stay out of trouble, have more friends or even have more respect.
Thesis: The companies advertising are only using cetchy phrases to their consumers to buy their products besides making quality products
Introduction: "Is the store brand just as good as the name brand," says the customer at the counter. "Of course it is," I tell customers this a few times at the pharmacy convience store I work at. Why doesn't the custmore know that when they buy those expensive name brands they are just buying the advirtisements. It shouldn't matter that the store brand doesn't have commercials, the products are no different from each other. the companies adviretising are only using cetchy phrases to get their consumers to buy their products besides making good quality produts.
Conclusion: When you walk into nay store looking at the items on the shelves with name brands next to the store brands. Don't bother going to the cashier asking him or her if they are the same thing when the products have the same ingrediants and are placed in the same aisle. Instead, think to yourself if it is the same. Advirtisements are just used to convince the consumers that their company has the best of the best, but they don't, all they have is flashy lights and cetchy phrases. Everyone should act out against advirtisements and not buy name brand products, showing companies it is more about good quality products.
Topic-modern technology can produce more inconvenience than convenience. 1. Modern technology disrupts and aggrivates almost everybody. 2. Modern technology causes more fatalities and illnesses than any other "convenince". 3. Technology today, is ruining our ability to think on our own and physically do everyday chores. Intro- When you look around, what do you see? A computer, cellphone, ipod? technology now days is sometimes more a headache than an easy time saver. Conclusion- To reduce frequent headaches from modern technology, just be more considerate and uderstand what you need it for. Inconveniencing yourself to today's technology, is not what it was made for!
Thesis #1- Due to babying students,offering the "easier" classes to any student, and letting students do what they want because they are an athelete, high schools do not prepare students for college.
Thesis #2- Teachers give the false impression that college is only one step up from high school when in reality, college is a whole different ball game.
Thesis #3- When you are in high school, you are familiar with all your teachers and can usually get out of trouble by what your last name is,but in college nobody really cares who you are.
Intro- Whether you come from a big high school or a small high school, most everything that happens is all about politics. You can either be the best student or the worst student depending on who you are.When you are in high school, you are familiar with all your teachers and ca usually get out of trouble by what your last name is, but in college nobody cares who you are.
Conclusion- If teachers would treat every student equal and not baby certain students then they would be much more prepared for college.
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Thesis #1- Learning from your mistakes is the most effective way to learn.
Thesis #2- When you make a mistake, pick yourself up and don't make the same mistake again.
Thesis #3- When you fail at something you do, turn it into a positive influence for the future.
Introduction- Too often, people fall and refuse to get up or make a mistake and don't correct it. When people do this, they aren't grabbing opportunities that come to them. Learning from your mistakes is the most effective way to learn.
Conclusion- If you will acknowledge when you mess up and correct it you will do good in life. It is those corrections of your mistakes that teach you the most.
1. Failure is not an option, but a door way to knowledge.
2. Mistakes are not things to regret, but to take a lesson from.
3. It takes more of a person to get back up and keep going when thy have fallen then to lay there.
Intro-When we were children we were so afraid of messing up and making a mistake, but as we get older we need to see that failure is not option, but a door way to knowledge
Con-So as we go through life have no regrets about the past. Look at the past as learning time and be glad that the past happened the way it did.
Thesis#1- To undertake on adventure is to live life to the fullest.
Thesis#2- To be happy one must take in some adventure in life.
Thesis#3- Life is nothing unless you adventure out and find happiness.
Introduction- Most people do not find happiness unless they adventure out into the world, but one must be willing to take these adventures in order to find this.
Conclusion- As long as you are willing to take the adventures then you will find happiness in life.
Thesis 1: Complaining too much ruins good friendships.
Thesis 2: Complaining excessively, makes others see you as a negative person.
Thesis 3: A person that complains a lot, tends to be selfish with a negative outlook on life.
Introduction: Don’t you hate spending time with a person that is always gloomy and pessimistic? When you complain it seems as if nothing you say is positive or constructive. This makes people not want to get to know you because you seem selfish. Complaining excessively makes others see you as a negative person.
Conclusion: We need to remember that complaining does not benefit anyone, not even ourrself. However, having a positive attitude will make you happier and more attractive to other people.
1. Never let first impressions be permanent on feelings towards someone.
2. First impressions can often be misleading and scare us away from a good thing if we judge that person right away.
3. Most people are shy when they first meet someone new which can lead others to think they aren't talkative or that they don't like them.
intro - Whenever two new people first meet, more often than not, they right away judge each other based on looks and appearances which turn out to be the opposite of what that person is really like.
conclusion- Despite what a person looks like on the outside, it really is what is on the inside that should impress someone, not the nice clothes they are wearing or the car they drive.
Thesis#1- Doing good for others only makes you that much more of a better person.
Thesis#2- The thought of spending your Saturday at a community service project may at first seem like a drag, but you may be surprised at the fulfilling outcomes.
Thesis#3- You may not think that you colud be the pne to put a smile on a strangers face, but doing a good deed can make all the difference.
Introduction-The thought of spending your Saturday at a community service project may at first seem like a drag, but you may be surprised to find out the fulfilling outcomes. The feeling that you get when you do a good deed for someone and see the smile they have on their face that you know was because of what you did is the best feeling.
Conclusion- Helping someone out in a time of need is a good deed that everyone should experience in their lifetime. The feeling of helping someone out that truly neeeds it is a feeling like no other.
Good deeds can make a wonderful difference:
Thesis #1- Kindess is a contagious disease from which there is no cure.
Thesis #2- A good deed, big or small, can make a differnece.
Thesis #3- Generosity is the key to success.
Introduction-
A good deed is like a yawn. When you see someone else yawn you can't help but to do the same. It's a "bug" that travels from person to person with no end. It is "What goes around comes around" in its best form. Kindness is a contagious disease, from which there is no cure.
Conclusion-
Whether it a simple compliment or giving thousands of dollars to charity, it is making the world a better place. What if we all decided to "pay it forward"? It would turn the world upside down.
Thesis #1- The most common mistake made is not learning from the mistakes you make and preventing them from happening again.
Thesis #2- Mistakes are not only mishaps, but building blocks that form the foundation of who you are.
Thesis #3- Our successes are a result of the lessons that our mistakes have taught us.
Introduction- Everyone loves a success story. Everyone loves to see the diamond encrusted layer on the ouside that shines like a cloudless summer afternoon. However it is not our successes that make us who we are. Our successes are a result of the lessons that our mistakes have taught us. Without these mistakes, there is no success.
Conclusion- If you take the mistakes you've made and learn from them, then your lessons will become stepping stones on a path to a successful life. However if you fail to learn from the mistakes you make then you will walk a path never paved, but always ending in failure.
Thesis #1: Participation in a school sport teaches leadership qualities.
Thesis #2: When actively a part of one of your school's teams or clubs, it is teaching you not only leadership qualities but also how to work well with others.
Thesis #3: Joining a club or sport can teach you dedication and/or loyalty to one particular thing.
Introduction: In today's society, there are far too many followers and not enough leaders. When actively a part of one of your school's teams or clubs, it is teaching you not only leadership qualities but also how to work well with others.
Conclusion: School sports are just a tiny stepping stone to producing a new generation of good leaders. Without leaders, there are no followers.
Thesis #1- Gossiping and running your mouth to other people about a person looses friends.
Thesis #2- Being disrespectful and not keeping your mouth shut at the right time can cause consiquences and disciplinary actions.
Thesis #3- You should always think before you speak, you never know what might come out and get you in trouble.
Introduction- Failure to keep your mouth shut, such as, gossiping, or being disrespectful can get you into a lot of trouble or even cause you to loose friends. It's best to keep your mouth shut or even think before you speak and everyone will be happy.
Conclusion- If you will just think before you speak or just keep your mouth closed you will probably stay out of trouble, have more friends or even have more respect.
Thesis: The companies advertising are only using cetchy phrases to their consumers to buy their products besides making quality products
Introduction: "Is the store brand just as good as the name brand," says the customer at the counter. "Of course it is," I tell customers this a few times at the pharmacy convience store I work at. Why doesn't the custmore know that when they buy those expensive name brands they are just buying the advirtisements. It shouldn't matter that the store brand doesn't have commercials, the products are no different from each other. the companies adviretising are only using cetchy phrases to get their consumers to buy their products besides making good quality produts.
Conclusion: When you walk into nay store looking at the items on the shelves with name brands next to the store brands. Don't bother going to the cashier asking him or her if they are the same thing when the products have the same ingrediants and are placed in the same aisle. Instead, think to yourself if it is the same. Advirtisements are just used to convince the consumers that their company has the best of the best, but they don't, all they have is flashy lights and cetchy phrases. Everyone should act out against advirtisements and not buy name brand products, showing companies it is more about good quality products.
~Deona Hooker
Topic-modern technology can produce more inconvenience than convenience.
1. Modern technology disrupts and aggrivates almost everybody.
2. Modern technology causes more fatalities and illnesses than any other "convenince".
3. Technology today, is ruining our ability to think on our own and physically do everyday chores.
Intro- When you look around, what do you see? A computer, cellphone, ipod? technology now days is sometimes more a headache than an easy time saver.
Conclusion- To reduce frequent headaches from modern technology, just be more considerate and uderstand what you need it for. Inconveniencing yourself to today's technology, is not what it was made for!
Thesis #1- Due to babying students,offering the "easier" classes to any student, and letting students do what they want because they are an athelete, high schools do not prepare students for college.
Thesis #2- Teachers give the false impression that college is only one step up from high school when in reality, college is a whole different ball game.
Thesis #3- When you are in high school, you are familiar with all your teachers and can usually get out of trouble by what your last name is,but in college nobody really cares who you are.
Intro- Whether you come from a big high school or a small high school, most everything that happens is all about politics. You can either be the best student or the worst student depending on who you are.When you are in high school, you are familiar with all your teachers and ca usually get out of trouble by what your last name is, but in college nobody cares who you are.
Conclusion- If teachers would treat every student equal and not baby certain students then they would be much more prepared for college.
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